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Wind Beneath My Wings

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https://www.smule.com/recording/bette-midler-wind-beneath-my-wings/1088277799_1483226920 This is a warts and all presentation of my singing. I tried a different intro to Bette Midler. Be interested to know whether you guys think that is works. I was going to re-record correcting any vocal errors but i feel to get the best from a review I need to show where I'm actually going wrong as well as the well-executed parts :) currently I have quite a poorly chest. Any thoughts on speeding recovery? Thanks guys.

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Gill,

It is nice.

- It is flat on the verses, but the chorus seems to be tuned a bit better. You need to sing the verses again. 

- It is hard to hear the diction and articulation of your lyrics. Why is the diction sluggish?

Lets have an offline discussion.

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