TMV World Legacy Member rabbitfollows Posted August 18, 2012 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted August 18, 2012 Hi. I'm new to this board, never found an active board about singing - so i hope i will enjoy my stay. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nl6a-iZM9xE This is the latest song i've recorded. Please tell me what you think about it!!! Greets Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Adoney Posted August 18, 2012 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted August 18, 2012 Pretty good, but from the small video size, I thought you were wearing a blouse, lol. You get some reaaly good resonance out of those notes you hold, but you might want to work a little bit more on the dynamics, the sustain is nice, but add softness and volume dynamics with your voice. But good job! for an example on what I mean, check out one of the masters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Adoney Posted August 18, 2012 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted August 18, 2012 In a song with more sparse vocal melodies, there has to be a lot of dynamic to the vocals in order to compensate, but I think you still did a fine job on most of it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member rabbitfollows Posted August 19, 2012 Author TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted August 19, 2012 i'm wearing a linen thank you for your replies the song is based on one-chord, it's quite a simple song... i too think there should be more dynamics. I will work on that on the next song, this song is finished. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member rabbitfollows Posted August 21, 2012 Author TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted August 21, 2012 More inputs, anyone? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member JessicaAkhtar Posted August 22, 2012 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted August 22, 2012 Very nice. Anyone watch a football game? The new round of Premier League start.I really like Roma. I am a loyal Roma fans. Design [url=http://authenticsoccerjersey.org/as-roma-c-59_60.html]Roma shirts[/url] also looks good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member rabbitfollows Posted August 22, 2012 Author TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted August 22, 2012 Thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Vocalist Dad Posted August 22, 2012 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted August 22, 2012 I like it, I think there is real potential there. I like what youv'e done with the melody, it is a little haunting in a good way. Keep it up. Steve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Felipe Carvalho Posted August 23, 2012 Share Posted August 23, 2012 Didnt like it man. Sorry. Cant understand anything you are singing. Technically the voice is too low and constricted, it can be much more open and full. Lower its sounding better and more comfortable. Since its your material, I advice working more into that part where your voice is more effective right now, and do try to work to get the words more defined, even the vowels are sounding almost all the same... Hope it helps, GL! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Vocalist Dad Posted August 23, 2012 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted August 23, 2012 Rabbitfollows, Are your lyrics complete on this song or are you just working on a possible melody for the song? I guess I thought you were kind of working out what might be the melodic line of the song might sound like; I didn't really pick up any particular lyrics. I do like the general feel of the song. Steve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member rabbitfollows Posted August 23, 2012 Author TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted August 23, 2012 Here is the lyric "i met you in the wild night where all is slumber and all is fright i saw you through my glas i took you under a deranged setting but never set my love on fire you don't know what love is" yes... also, people around me that has listened to this song had a hard time hearing the words, so i need to better myself on that. i hadn't time to re-record this, and the project ain't saved since i reinstalled windows to windows 8 try-out version. so i can't change anything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member rabbitfollows Posted August 24, 2012 Author TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted August 24, 2012 I changed the video into something gay men turns on by, and women... The audio is the same. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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