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Here is something I wrote (lyrics). I found a backing track on Youtube since I have no access to my own music or anyone to write for me. I put my lyrics to this to give an idea of what I had in mind when I wrote the words. If anyone could put similar music to the words that would be great. This is kind of a rough cut here just to give an idea. I heard a tune (instrumental jazz) in the car one day and started singing my own words to it and that is how this was born. I know you guys are metal heads but...:D

Maybe someone can blues this thing a little or jazz blues?

http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?songid=12085793&q=hi

The song is about a girl from a down and out town who moves up (thinks she does) and and then seems to forget where she came from. But she is really no different. She just suddenly "thinks" she is. She just needs to come back down to earth. But she thinks "we" need to kiss her arse! Not gonna happen!! " I ain't comin up to you"

Lyrics:

Come Down To Me Baby

You better come back down to me baby, cause I ain’t comin’ up to you

You better come back down to me baby, cause I ain’t comin’ up to you

But if you wanna meet in the middle, I’ll see what I can do.

You left me for that money man, but he turned out to be a fool

And now you think you’re someone, that can take us all to school.

Ridin’ round in your fancy car like you know a thing or two

You better come back down to me baby, cause I ain’t comin’ up to you

You better come back down here woman, there ain’t nuthin’ owed to you

But if you wanna meet in the middle, girl I’ll see what I can do.

You got no time for me now, thinkin’ who the hell you are

You better come back down here woman, you ain’t no superstar

Just come on home now you’ve taken this too far.

You better come back down to me baby, cause I ain’t comin’ up to you

You better come back down to me baby, cause I ain’t comin’ up to you

But if you wanna meet in the middle, I’ll see what I can do.

You said get my act together, learn a thing or two

Girl I don’t even know what that means but I’ll tell you something too,

You better come back down to me baby, cause I ain’t comin’ up to you

Yea, you better come back down to me baby, cause I ain’t comin’ up to you

You better come back down to me baby, cause I ain’t comin’ up to you

But if you wanna meet in the middle, I’ll see what I can do.

© 2013 T. Pressimone

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I really liked it. The style kind of reminded me of Al Jolson and his famous admirer, Diamond David Lee Roth.

Keep the track you have. Not only am I just one guitar, but you have full accompaniment and even with your "click record and go", this sounded like it was blended well.

keep it.

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