christibbs Posted March 15, 2013 Share Posted March 15, 2013 http://fawm.org/songs/8687/ I feel like I sound really weird or goofy. What do you guys think, I feel like it is pretty good. Feel free to be negative. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MDEW Posted March 15, 2013 Share Posted March 15, 2013 I'd like to hear it without the harmonies. Things sound off pitch. I can't tell whether its the guitar or one or more voices in the singing. Over all concept of the song is OK. Keep working in it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
christibbs Posted March 16, 2013 Author Share Posted March 16, 2013 Thank you sir. Yes the harmonies are weird. It was like 2 in the morning and people were home. I forgot I did a better version the day after. I like the concept of trying to write an old folk song but it's hard not to sound like a tool. I just thought reevers were cool. Any suggestions? Like, what part if any were you like "Uhhh what the (*auto edit*)?" in terms of the song, not me being spacy and half asleep. * and I suck at harmonies, because I just slide all over the place.... and my brother broke my guitar so I'm playing a 1/2 squire acoustic from when I was 8 with spray paint all over it. Horrible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kongra Posted March 16, 2013 Share Posted March 16, 2013 Its great but you need to cut back on the harmonies they sound great but you overuse them way too much and they tend to sound a little out of pitch / off beat from time to time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ronws Posted March 16, 2013 Share Posted March 16, 2013 Lose the harmony tracks. Not only are they off pitch, they are off time, too. It's making a muddled mess of things. Let's hear just the guitar and your voice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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