Original folk song, what do you think?

[christibbs]

http://fawm.org/songs/8687/

I feel like I sound really weird or goofy.

What do you guys think, I feel like it is pretty good.

Feel free to be negative.

[MDEW]

I'd like to hear it without the harmonies. Things sound off pitch. I can't tell whether its the guitar or one or more voices in the singing.

Over all concept of the song is OK. Keep working in it.

[christibbs]

Thank you sir. Yes the harmonies are weird. It was like 2 in the morning and people were home. I forgot I did a better version the day after. I like the concept of trying to write an old folk song but it's hard not to sound like a tool. I just thought reevers were cool. Any suggestions? Like, what part if any were you like "Uhhh what the (*auto edit*)?" in terms of the song, not me being spacy and half asleep.

* and I suck at harmonies, because I just slide all over the place.... and my brother broke my guitar so I'm playing a 1/2 squire acoustic from when I was 8 with spray paint all over it.

Horrible.

[kongra]

Its great but you need to cut back on the harmonies they sound great but you overuse them way too much and they tend to sound a little out of pitch / off beat from time to time

[ronws]

Lose the harmony tracks. Not only are they off pitch, they are off time, too. It's making a muddled mess of things. Let's hear just the guitar and your voice.