Orig. in Hebrew (Would love to hear what you think)

[gilad]

Hey Guys.

This is an original song of mine in hebrew. I would love to hear what you think about the melody the vocals, the production and about everything in whole. The name of the song is (Always with you). Since you dont understand the language it would be interesting to hear your feedback. If you would like, ill translate it for you.

http://soundcloud.com/gilad-alon/m0b3eq8nauy3/s-PDmzm

Looking forward to hearing from you

Gilad

[ronws]

I liked it, without understanding the words.

I must admit, the only Hebrew I know is La Chayim, a popular toast.

You think I would know more. Part of my upbringing is christian and you would think, with all the lip service christians pay toward respecting judaism, we would learn some more hebrew. Oh well. good stuff. You should keep this up, whether you write in Hebrew or English.

[MDEW]

I like the tune, the dynamics, the music.

Coming from me this may not be a good thing because I do not like most of the music that I hear coming from the established recording industry.

Although I like being able to understand the lyrics of the song that I am listening too it does not bother me in the least that I cannot understand the words you are singing.

I am a Hillbilly/Hippy from the 70's middle eastern US. I am fluent in broken English 70's slang. Other than that I struggle to understand what most people are singing about anyway.

[ronws]

I like the tune, the dynamics, the music.

Coming from me this may not be a good thing because I do not like most of the music that I hear coming from the established recording industry.

Although I like being able to understand the lyrics of the song that I am listening too it does not bother me in the least that I cannot understand the words you are singing.

I am a Hillbilly/Hippy from the 70's middle eastern US. I am fluent in broken English 70's slang. Other than that I struggle to understand what most people are singing about anyway.

So, you are like everyone else?

:cool:

[gno]

Excellent! Full of great hooks. Nice production. Great arrangement. Your voice is really good on this. Also all the harmonies and guitar parts are well put together. I really like this kind of pop rock stuff.

[gilad]

Thanks guys. So, should I roll it out this way?

[gno]

Thanks guys. So, should I roll it out this way?

I don't see any reason not to.

[MDEW]

I have no idea what the words mean. :| But then again I can barely make sense of the english language( I'm a hillbilly/Hippy).

I like the melody and the way it was all put together better than most of the songs I have heard that was put out by mainstream music industry.

[gilad]

Hey Guys.

Entered a competition a few days ago. I am now 1 of the 7 finalists. Winner gets to record a single, and exposure. So... I hopefully my song is up to par ;)

[ronws]

Hey Guys.

Entered a competition a few days ago. I am now 1 of the 7 finalists. Winner gets to record a single, and exposure. So... I hopefully my song is up to par

Good luck.