TMV World Legacy Member Chapman123 Posted March 10, 2015 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted March 10, 2015 I tried to write a more unsettling song but I'm not sure if my voice and the guitar are blending well or if just sounds awkward, any input? BTW, these are just some of the songs I might include in a future demo album, I have some more which I won't upload to soundcloud but I'm seeking some opinions on these songs to determine whether or not I should have them on the cd. haha I did forget, sorry 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderator & Review Specialist Gsoul82 Posted March 10, 2015 Moderator & Review Specialist Share Posted March 10, 2015 You forgot the link, lol "Quitters Never Win" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Chapman123 Posted March 10, 2015 Author TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted March 10, 2015 Here's the link lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member KillerKu Posted March 16, 2015 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted March 16, 2015 The vocals sound fine to me. You kind of vocal fried maybe a bit on the low sections like 'no one cares' but it doesn't sound bad and has a kind of sinister dark character that suits the song. Which is cool. Is there anything about he vocal that was concerning you? It's kind of a clustered, claustrophobic and dark song. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Chapman123 Posted March 17, 2015 Author TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted March 17, 2015 Thanks for the response KillerKu . That's exactly what I was going for, I just wanted to make sure it felt appropriate for the song and not gawky or hollow. I wanted the guitar and the voice to still complement eachother but I wasn't sure if I had gone too far with the vocals. You cleared everything up for me though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Pekka Posted March 18, 2015 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted March 18, 2015 That is a great song ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Chapman123 Posted March 19, 2015 Author TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted March 19, 2015 Thanks for the kind words Pekka Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member ronws Posted March 20, 2015 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted March 20, 2015 Cool song. All of your stuff sounds very haunted. Down a dark path we go ... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Chapman123 Posted April 11, 2015 Author TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted April 11, 2015 Haha Ronws my stuff has been very somber lately. I hope to create some lighter tunes soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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