Jens

http://www.speedyshare.com/658921583.html Try this and see if it works, i hope you understand what twang means The mic distorts abit sorry for that

Xolin i heard your siren, why are you stressing it so much? Try add an exercise when you do it slowly while moving over the bridge.

well thanks for the response, il see if i can get those things sorted so im more spot on just to make sure i got this right the second sentence in the first verse and in the second verse... second verse: when im gone your there why do these rumours come alive well your not breaking me*(half growl) the thought of falling endlessly in sleep <--- so im off here falling from the darkest corners in my mind<--- and this? going from chest to mix bridge nothing more or nothing less waiting for my kiss of death(scream)

Thanks Matt! yeah i know that chest is not my power my chest ends on like F4 but i need to lighten it alot earlyer not to blow right into the "wall" Yeah i could easily take on Halford in a match if it where in looks and charisma in singing Halford is a beast -.- Many of the points i use head very low is stylistic reasons:P Like in the stick of the song i move from a falsetto thats very low down in the range up to a mixed quality thats higherup with alot of dist. I like to play with dynamic changes like that at what point(time) in the song was i off? Gonna try to correct such stuff :P

some metal for yah http://www.speedyshare.com/572749422.html

Very good voice! the chourus of infinity of pain is a beast! I agree with Byron on some parts, but it's not very often you hear people articulate good that high up in the range...