Robert Lunte

Hi Gill, welcome to our community!
- What I can hear in your voice sounds like it is more then lovely Gill. But can you upload one that doesn't have the other singer in the track please? It is getting in the way of our ability to hear you. Try another one that has no other singers in it.

Hi Gill, welcome to our community!
- What I can hear in your voice sounds like it is more then lovely Gill. But can you upload one that doesn't have the other singer in the track please? It is getting in the way of our ability to hear you. Try another one that has no other singers in it.

https://www.smule.com/recording/eva-cassidy-wade-in-the-water/830708093_1214803719

This was quite a challenge 

Text Interpretation of this song.
https://youtu.be/XpTnPLiZ_YU
My performance of it.
https://youtu.be/fiXp3qDXEvE

Great job guys, I loved it. One thing I noticed watching you sing these types of songs is it takes an amazing amount of power to pull them off. You look like you are going through a really tough workout. Definitely the types of songs only a few brave dare to attempt. I tip my hat to you sir.

Hey, folks!
We just finished working on this cool song. So any thoughts and critique are appreciated

I enjoyed it very much until the chorus, there i think it sounded too dull and dopy, you need to brighten the sound a little more IMO. But you did a good job, both of you.

Yeah, Doc! You're right.

i loved it jugulator thanks for your efforts im melted
i think im going to sing and record this song asap
and i agree you Bruce singing very loudly and Ken Tamplin sings maidens songs same way

I think you go a bit too much into a nasal sond on the heavy parts! good job, though.

Yep. Sometimes it happens. Thank you for the feedback.

Thank you. Yes, singing such powerful songs requires much effort. As another example, you can look at how Ken Tamplin sings Iron Maiden's stuff.

Thank you, man!

Hi Vahur,
Welcome to our community, its great to have you here!
- First thing that comes to mind is I think your vocal effects are too much. Although I like hearing the delay on 8th note tempo, it just seems too hot in my opinion.
- I like your groove a lot. You really feel the rhythm well and have a good sense of groove and feel... that is really good.
- Honestly, I am not hearing a lot of problems with your voice technically in this performance. I think it sounds pretty cool and believe you did a great job with this. It doesn't sound too high for you and the energy is very good. I really don't see a lot here to be concerned about. 
Its quite good, minus the effects... turn the effects WAY down... keep some, but bring it down and this will be perfectly tasty and groov'n.
 
If you would like to explore your voice more and train it to its full potential, I invite you to take a look at my program, The Four Pillars of Singing. 
 
GREAT JOB!
Hope that helps... 
 

Hi,
Looking for some feedback. With this song I constantly have the feeling that the singing is not under my full control. .This is the ~18th take over 2,5 hour period, my challenge was to get this song without major-screwups done in one go. Do I need more energy? Less energy? Am I overdoing it? Is it simply too high for me and should lower it further (I'm already down 3 semitones from the original)? What about the overall tone and emotion, does it feel to have a connection with the song? These are some of the questions I have. 
 
 
Thanks!

Seraphin,
Welcome back! It is great to have you here again and thanks for sharing your tune. 
I look forward to giving you some feedback on it.
In the meantime, hopefully some other folks will jump in here and help you out as well.

"SeraphiN",
 
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Adolph

Hey!
I decided to come back here after really long time. Some of You may remember me from my duet videos, but life is life and I'm trying to do something on my own now for some time. Could I get any feedback? Any criticism? 
This video is a bit old but I think it's one of the songs I feel most comfortable with

If someone like it or think that it's worth it I would really appreciate subscribtion on my channel, it means a lot

Cheers, hope to stay here for longer period then last time!
 

... count all songs in 8ths... "1 & 2 & 3 & 4 & ..."... don't count in quarters, always count in 8ths. It is the best way you can begin to properly feel syncopation and groove. 

Would something like this get me through an open mic performance?

I want to try.. Rob, where did you get the backing track. Not able to find a decent backing track.
Got the track at www.karaoke-version.com .

Same style of singing? Make it our own? What are the terms of this challenge? I've never done one before. I'm not much of a fan of Dickinson's style, even if I do admire his abilities or can sing the same style. Then again, I'm not a fan of Ric Ocasek's style either, but I'm doing a cover of the song, Drive, for someone.

Hello?