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You sound really good on the chorus and the higher notes when you are going for it. Nice tone and nice expression. The thing is that both verses are suffering pitch problems and rhythm problems. The very first couple of lines in the song are extremely important to get right, otherwise you can put off the listener. There are just a few - but important spots - where you are going sharp in pitch, and getting ahead of yourself in rhythm (rushing) - in both verses. If you work to eliminate those issues, the performance should come together nicely.

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Thanks guys! Geno, do you mean the words "mind" and "door" in the first verse for example? Where the note changes half-way through?

Edit: I just listened to the original again and as a result, noticed the "rushing" of the words in my version! Cannot unhear :lol:.

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