TMV World Legacy Member OldPainless Posted October 18, 2013 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted October 18, 2013 Input/opinions always welcome and encouraged :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member gno Posted October 18, 2013 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted October 18, 2013 You sound really good on the chorus and the higher notes when you are going for it. Nice tone and nice expression. The thing is that both verses are suffering pitch problems and rhythm problems. The very first couple of lines in the song are extremely important to get right, otherwise you can put off the listener. There are just a few - but important spots - where you are going sharp in pitch, and getting ahead of yourself in rhythm (rushing) - in both verses. If you work to eliminate those issues, the performance should come together nicely. My Music:http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=897808 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member MDEW Posted October 18, 2013 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted October 18, 2013 That was really good. I enjoyed that. "You need a strong foundation to reach the heights." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member TheNewGuy Posted October 18, 2013 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted October 18, 2013 I really enjoyed it!:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member OldPainless Posted October 19, 2013 Author TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted October 19, 2013 Thanks guys! Geno, do you mean the words "mind" and "door" in the first verse for example? Where the note changes half-way through? Edit: I just listened to the original again and as a result, noticed the "rushing" of the words in my version! Cannot unhear . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member MarceloG_uy Posted February 5, 2014 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted February 5, 2014 Nice version , here it's mine, i did not have a good mic, it's a little old recording. http://www.goear.com/listen/a936710/hello-lionel-y-yo- Critic!! bye friends! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member CasenW Posted February 17, 2014 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted February 17, 2014 I really liked it! You did a very good job of emoting. Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Administrator Adolph Namlik Posted February 17, 2014 Administrator Share Posted February 17, 2014 Painless, Would like to hear you on Soundcloud, but one again, it's glitching, and all I get is that "Oh. No" message :mad: Regards, Adolph Adolph C. NamlikAdministrator ~ The Modern Vocalist WorldWestern N.Y.Email : chief188@hughes.net716~257~9606"My Life's A Stage" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member AmirMaor Posted February 18, 2014 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted February 18, 2014 Very beautiful, thanks for sharing :) FIRST SONG IN ENGLISH - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BUmkbv-v-vI When you have done something you really love? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Jugulator Posted February 18, 2014 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted February 18, 2014 Great cover, man! Really good tone. http://www.youtube.com/user/IgorJugulatorZotov Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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