TMV World Legacy Member Bono Posted November 1, 2014 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted November 1, 2014 Hello everybody! I`m new in the site. Please feel free to comment, thank you Please, review and critique my latest post: Donny Hathaway - A song for yousouncloud: https://soundcloud.com/matias-azar-1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member ronws Posted November 3, 2014 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted November 3, 2014 I think you did a really good job. Your articulation of english is good. Of course, you don't sound american but that doesn't matter, to me. I can understand everything you are singing, here. I usually prefer the version by Louis Armstrong, even though he had a voice that rattled, even when he spoke. You should definitely keep this song in your set of songs you can do anywhere at a moment's notice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Bono Posted November 4, 2014 Author TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted November 4, 2014 Hi ronws! thank you so much for your response :) Please, review and critique my latest post: Donny Hathaway - A song for yousouncloud: https://soundcloud.com/matias-azar-1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Marcus Posted November 12, 2014 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted November 12, 2014 Hey bono, this was real good! Very nice timbre. I like the jazz approach on this one. If you want anything to improve (this is just a minor thing though), it's that you at some places kinda "slide around" a bit too much before hitting the notes spot on. Nothing gamebreaking, just a detail :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member BlackieJane Posted November 12, 2014 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted November 12, 2014 Hey, I thought you did a really good job. You have a really nice tone and your pronunciation is really good considering English isn't your first language. Overall, you have a great voice. I'm a big Louis Armstrong fan, so I love the song choice. I love jazz and blues personally, so my advice would be to study Louis a bit more. Although his voice was a one-of-a-kind, he was so huge in changing the way singing was approached and he influenced a lot of other singers. If you want that jazz feel, try playing around with the time and connect the time with the telling of the story. I mean, that's if you even do jazz or want to do jazz. If you do, listen to Louis solo on trumpet and try to follow those and then eventually veer off and tell the story your way. I'm only giving this advice because I think you have an awesome voice and think you could pull it off. Good job though. www.stoptimeentertainment.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member Bono Posted November 18, 2014 Author TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted November 18, 2014 Thank you Marcus and BlackieJane for you kind words and for your advices, i find them accurate and useful. I know i have some troubles with time.. i think it is a great idea to listen to Louis Amstrong solo on the trumpet, i`ll do it! :) Please, review and critique my latest post: Donny Hathaway - A song for yousouncloud: https://soundcloud.com/matias-azar-1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TMV World Legacy Member MDEW Posted November 19, 2014 TMV World Legacy Member Share Posted November 19, 2014 Sounds good. Smooth, Resonant, Warm, Wonderful. :) "You need a strong foundation to reach the heights." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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