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JonJon reacted to Xamedhi in Check out some sirens GABC
Yep, that's it
Try to release just a bit of weight or "grab", and see if the C5 becomes more stable or resonant, and also see how higher you can go, by releasing more and more weight. With the resonance you are using, even if you lighten a lot more it will keep the "chesty" timbre I think. See what happens! you don't lose anything by trying
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JonJon got a reaction from Adolph Namlik in Happy Birthday Sugarboo - original song
yeah...dunno how comfortable id be in trying to follow "formulas" to make something audience friendly. If im going to go that route id just stop playing altogether and let a computer algorithm do it all.
This song was really nothing more than a personal greeting card to one girl. As long as I got in the words "Sugarboo" and "booboo" (it's hidden in there too lol) then im ok
If I ever write anything resembling that Garth Brooks song, or any modern "country" song...it will be with a gun at my head and even then id probably just tell 'em to shoot
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JonJon got a reaction from ronws in Happy Birthday Sugarboo - original song
yeah...dunno how comfortable id be in trying to follow "formulas" to make something audience friendly. If im going to go that route id just stop playing altogether and let a computer algorithm do it all.
This song was really nothing more than a personal greeting card to one girl. As long as I got in the words "Sugarboo" and "booboo" (it's hidden in there too lol) then im ok
If I ever write anything resembling that Garth Brooks song, or any modern "country" song...it will be with a gun at my head and even then id probably just tell 'em to shoot
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JonJon reacted to ronws in Happy Birthday Sugarboo - original song
Yeah, what I hear as major diminished sounds are a result of the whole arrangement, not just you playing a diminshed chord on a guitar or synth.
For example, on "Dead or Alive." while the bland plays a modal D, Jon makes it a D major by singing on F#4, thereby creating a major chord with the entire group.
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JonJon reacted to ellise k in Original song "Morning Light"
i enjoyed listening to your song. I liked the edge to it and the honesty in the lyrics
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JonJon reacted to Jens in Do I Really Have A Crap Voice?
No you dony have a crappy voice, sounds good. But i would guess you should work abit on your confidence, why? cause there wioll always be people who dislike your voice regardless of how good you get! Heck i i sometimes get to hear i dont sound good and im bloody amazing so chill and have fun
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JonJon reacted to Jens in Pyramaze- what lies beyond
Me tackling some progressive metal! Thanks to kristoffer for the amazing backtrack and guitar
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JonJon got a reaction from Adolph Namlik in I cant help falling in love with you
very nice. I had to fight to find anything to critique.
One tiny thing you might try. Work on "building" the song a bit more. The song is in 'AABA' form. Something like verse-verse-bridge-verse. So you can sit back and look at that and try to figure out what you want to do ahead of time to keep the song moving forward to the end.
The bridge, just by the nature of it going to different chords and different melodies will sort of take care of itself since it already provides a nice change from the 2 verses that preceded it.
So that leaves the verses to play with. As it stands you sort of did the 2nd verse as a carbon copy of the 1st verse. So in a way it DIDNT build....it just sort of cruised along...same pace, same volume, same phrasing.
Try to find a few small ways to intensify that 2nd verse. Maybe a slight volume increase. Maybe pick a few words and add a little more expression on them. Maybe the words "I", "be" "sin" "cant" (or "help"). You dont have to go crazy but maybe add some extra melisma or slight inflections or whatever
Like I said, on the bridge you dont have to go too nuts because its already serving its function to provide variety.
The on the 3rd verse youd reach the peak of intensity...more volume, more expression, maybe find a few ways to intensify the phrasing a bit.
Then use that very last repeat on the last verse to bring it all back down.
Sounds like a lot but its not really. Here is the scheme:
1st verse. Nice calm intro. Nice and relaxed, smooth phrasing
2nd verse. Build it up a bit to a slight peak
Bridge. The bridge takes people to a different place. The intensity can actually back off a bit to set people up for hitting them hard on that last verse.
3rd verse. The payoff. The peak. Hit 'em hard and then at the end bring 'em back down gently
And im not talking about wild intensity swings here, since the song is a pretty calm song in the first place....more like a small but definite up and down build of emotion etc
So really I cant critique the singing itself, but you can plan ahead a bit to form a strategy to draw the people in and move them a bit more WITH the singing skills.
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The only itsy bitsy nitpicking singing thing I noticed was on the first verse, maybe you could have held the words "say" and "'in" a bit longer. And then on both verses, the last word "you" could be held a bit longer or softy faded out a bit longer. Sort of going by the Elvis version he held those 2 "you"s almost until the next word started (of course you have to get a breath in). On your version there is that slight gap after each 'you'
Other than that, great job! WAY better than I could do lol
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JonJon got a reaction from ellise k in I cant help falling in love with you
very nice. I had to fight to find anything to critique.
One tiny thing you might try. Work on "building" the song a bit more. The song is in 'AABA' form. Something like verse-verse-bridge-verse. So you can sit back and look at that and try to figure out what you want to do ahead of time to keep the song moving forward to the end.
The bridge, just by the nature of it going to different chords and different melodies will sort of take care of itself since it already provides a nice change from the 2 verses that preceded it.
So that leaves the verses to play with. As it stands you sort of did the 2nd verse as a carbon copy of the 1st verse. So in a way it DIDNT build....it just sort of cruised along...same pace, same volume, same phrasing.
Try to find a few small ways to intensify that 2nd verse. Maybe a slight volume increase. Maybe pick a few words and add a little more expression on them. Maybe the words "I", "be" "sin" "cant" (or "help"). You dont have to go crazy but maybe add some extra melisma or slight inflections or whatever
Like I said, on the bridge you dont have to go too nuts because its already serving its function to provide variety.
The on the 3rd verse youd reach the peak of intensity...more volume, more expression, maybe find a few ways to intensify the phrasing a bit.
Then use that very last repeat on the last verse to bring it all back down.
Sounds like a lot but its not really. Here is the scheme:
1st verse. Nice calm intro. Nice and relaxed, smooth phrasing
2nd verse. Build it up a bit to a slight peak
Bridge. The bridge takes people to a different place. The intensity can actually back off a bit to set people up for hitting them hard on that last verse.
3rd verse. The payoff. The peak. Hit 'em hard and then at the end bring 'em back down gently
And im not talking about wild intensity swings here, since the song is a pretty calm song in the first place....more like a small but definite up and down build of emotion etc
So really I cant critique the singing itself, but you can plan ahead a bit to form a strategy to draw the people in and move them a bit more WITH the singing skills.
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The only itsy bitsy nitpicking singing thing I noticed was on the first verse, maybe you could have held the words "say" and "'in" a bit longer. And then on both verses, the last word "you" could be held a bit longer or softy faded out a bit longer. Sort of going by the Elvis version he held those 2 "you"s almost until the next word started (of course you have to get a breath in). On your version there is that slight gap after each 'you'
Other than that, great job! WAY better than I could do lol
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JonJon reacted to Jarom in messing around with some song ideas
Messing around with a few song ideas. These are not polished at all yet and are in the early stages of song writing.
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0jF0P95iUbn
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0aDuD6nAyuB
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JonJon got a reaction from Rosa in I cant help falling in love with you
very nice. I had to fight to find anything to critique.
One tiny thing you might try. Work on "building" the song a bit more. The song is in 'AABA' form. Something like verse-verse-bridge-verse. So you can sit back and look at that and try to figure out what you want to do ahead of time to keep the song moving forward to the end.
The bridge, just by the nature of it going to different chords and different melodies will sort of take care of itself since it already provides a nice change from the 2 verses that preceded it.
So that leaves the verses to play with. As it stands you sort of did the 2nd verse as a carbon copy of the 1st verse. So in a way it DIDNT build....it just sort of cruised along...same pace, same volume, same phrasing.
Try to find a few small ways to intensify that 2nd verse. Maybe a slight volume increase. Maybe pick a few words and add a little more expression on them. Maybe the words "I", "be" "sin" "cant" (or "help"). You dont have to go crazy but maybe add some extra melisma or slight inflections or whatever
Like I said, on the bridge you dont have to go too nuts because its already serving its function to provide variety.
The on the 3rd verse youd reach the peak of intensity...more volume, more expression, maybe find a few ways to intensify the phrasing a bit.
Then use that very last repeat on the last verse to bring it all back down.
Sounds like a lot but its not really. Here is the scheme:
1st verse. Nice calm intro. Nice and relaxed, smooth phrasing
2nd verse. Build it up a bit to a slight peak
Bridge. The bridge takes people to a different place. The intensity can actually back off a bit to set people up for hitting them hard on that last verse.
3rd verse. The payoff. The peak. Hit 'em hard and then at the end bring 'em back down gently
And im not talking about wild intensity swings here, since the song is a pretty calm song in the first place....more like a small but definite up and down build of emotion etc
So really I cant critique the singing itself, but you can plan ahead a bit to form a strategy to draw the people in and move them a bit more WITH the singing skills.
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The only itsy bitsy nitpicking singing thing I noticed was on the first verse, maybe you could have held the words "say" and "'in" a bit longer. And then on both verses, the last word "you" could be held a bit longer or softy faded out a bit longer. Sort of going by the Elvis version he held those 2 "you"s almost until the next word started (of course you have to get a breath in). On your version there is that slight gap after each 'you'
Other than that, great job! WAY better than I could do lol
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JonJon got a reaction from Robert Lunte in I cant help falling in love with you
very nice. I had to fight to find anything to critique.
One tiny thing you might try. Work on "building" the song a bit more. The song is in 'AABA' form. Something like verse-verse-bridge-verse. So you can sit back and look at that and try to figure out what you want to do ahead of time to keep the song moving forward to the end.
The bridge, just by the nature of it going to different chords and different melodies will sort of take care of itself since it already provides a nice change from the 2 verses that preceded it.
So that leaves the verses to play with. As it stands you sort of did the 2nd verse as a carbon copy of the 1st verse. So in a way it DIDNT build....it just sort of cruised along...same pace, same volume, same phrasing.
Try to find a few small ways to intensify that 2nd verse. Maybe a slight volume increase. Maybe pick a few words and add a little more expression on them. Maybe the words "I", "be" "sin" "cant" (or "help"). You dont have to go crazy but maybe add some extra melisma or slight inflections or whatever
Like I said, on the bridge you dont have to go too nuts because its already serving its function to provide variety.
The on the 3rd verse youd reach the peak of intensity...more volume, more expression, maybe find a few ways to intensify the phrasing a bit.
Then use that very last repeat on the last verse to bring it all back down.
Sounds like a lot but its not really. Here is the scheme:
1st verse. Nice calm intro. Nice and relaxed, smooth phrasing
2nd verse. Build it up a bit to a slight peak
Bridge. The bridge takes people to a different place. The intensity can actually back off a bit to set people up for hitting them hard on that last verse.
3rd verse. The payoff. The peak. Hit 'em hard and then at the end bring 'em back down gently
And im not talking about wild intensity swings here, since the song is a pretty calm song in the first place....more like a small but definite up and down build of emotion etc
So really I cant critique the singing itself, but you can plan ahead a bit to form a strategy to draw the people in and move them a bit more WITH the singing skills.
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The only itsy bitsy nitpicking singing thing I noticed was on the first verse, maybe you could have held the words "say" and "'in" a bit longer. And then on both verses, the last word "you" could be held a bit longer or softy faded out a bit longer. Sort of going by the Elvis version he held those 2 "you"s almost until the next word started (of course you have to get a breath in). On your version there is that slight gap after each 'you'
Other than that, great job! WAY better than I could do lol
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JonJon reacted to Felipe Carvalho in Original song "Morning Light"
I did not like Jon. There is potential but its very raw for now. Main thing to work would be finding more relaxation, and explore more the vowels. More attention to the rhythm would also be important.
The chorus sounds as if you were singing another music on top of the harmony, I could not understand what you tried to do there exactly
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JonJon reacted to KillerKu in Original song "Morning Light"
This has got a dirty sound. The pitching isn't centered per se but it kind of works with the thematic which is grimy and a bit harsh (things I often like). I wouldn't quite know what to give for vocal advice, because it seems to have a cohesive sound, if not necessarily commercial.
I think the chorus is a bit too repetitive and doesn't develop enough for my tastes. The bridge at 1:25 is my favorite section, it has momentum and feels like the song is going in a forward direction.
A lot of popular music is very similar to chanting though. I've always had difficulty more difficulty with tolerating repetition even when I was a kid though. When I was growing up this song was a huge hit:
For me that combination of that chorus and that hook repeating were maddening. But it sold lots of albums and I knew people who were enamored from start to finish for repeated listens. Tolerance to repetition is very subjective among listeners it's actually really interesting and makes me wonder why people respond differently to it.
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JonJon reacted to ronws in Original song "Morning Light"
It was a bit of a surprise and a compliment to me when more than once person, including my wife, thought I sound like Glenn Hughes.
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JonJon reacted to MDEW in Original song "Morning Light"
"And when the Morning Comes" There is this growl thing in there. Maybe a product of the doubling but each first line of the chorus it is there. Mainly heard on "MORNING"
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JonJon reacted to MDEW in Original song "Morning Light"
Nice tone. A little too many chorus repeats but you knew that already. You sound pretty good already. With 4 pillars you will only get better.
Welcome to the forum.
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JonJon reacted to Felipe Carvalho in Felipe Carvalho - Would?
@ellise thank you!
@jon haha should be flood, I will check it! Indeed he says something in the lines of ehnto.Thanks for the words!!
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JonJon reacted to Felipe Carvalho in Felipe Carvalho - Would?
Hi folks, this is a song that the last time I was not quite happy on how it was sounding, new version with some differences on the approach:
Thanks everyone that can take a listen
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JonJon reacted to Jeremy Mohler in Marc Bolan/T. REX - Jeepster cover
Thanks man, that means a lot! Maybe he is a distant cousin haha.. I think it's the double track that makes it sound similar to the T. Rex style. I know the song you mention, but not sure if I've heard the original. I just know the hair metal version.
For me it was just a light twangy chest, I'm not bridging at all here or anything. If you are asking about the original song, I am not sure. I'd imagine the same but only he would know hehe. Thanks for listening.
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JonJon got a reaction from Jeremy Mohler in Marc Bolan/T. REX - Jeepster cover
Was this song head voice though?
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JonJon reacted to Adolph Namlik in Hello all, new TVS member here
Welcome to The Modern Vocalist World Forum, Jon !!!
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JonJon got a reaction from thematrixiam in Hello all, new TVS member here
Hello Robert and Hello to all!
I just ordered the TVS program and am excited to start working on my singing.
Quick bio. 48 Y.O. male from southside Virginia. I have played lead guitar since 1988. After taking many years away from home recording, I got back into it about 18 months ago and had to learn the new DAWs etc from scratch.
To make a long story short, I have about 50 "songs" on my hard drive that need vox. I also have quite a few lyrics written without any music etc. It has been difficult (impossible) for me to find any singers to work with so the next logical step is to just develop my own singing voice more. Hopefully it is not too late. Besides which, I love to sing even if I am not very technically aware at this moment.
As far as singing, I want to sing rock, classic rock, 80-90s rock, grunge, bluesy styles etc. In my songs I generally find myself in sort of the style of VH, Rainbow, Whitesnake, LedZep....sort of melodic and bluesy stuff. (at least thats the aim, hehe)
My fave singers in no order. Ann Wilson, David Coverdale, Goran Edman, John Sykes, Glenn Hughes, Mark Slaughter, Marq Torien, Barry Gibb, Layne Staley and many others. I am not fixated on copying anyone though, I just want to develop my own innate abilities. My dream song might be "Love Kills" by Mark Slaughter when he was with Vinnie Vincent, but again, its not a fixation. (Im aware Mark had a pretty high voice lol)
My current estimation of my singing abilities? I have potential to have a nice voice etc but am pretty clueless technically and totally untrained lol. Just from browsing vids etc I think I have a good understanding of some of the terminology....chest voice, head voice, falsetto, bridging etc. I understand the concept of vowel modification but have never tried to practice it myself.
I am probably like a lot of other untrained people. If the song happens to "fit" my current capabilities, then I sound decent. But if it doesn't, I sound like a frog that spent the previous day hollering at a sports event. Sometimes I can sing along with the verse to a song but when it goes into the higher chorus part I cant hit that.....or I can hit it but I have to jump up to head voice with no bridging going on lol.
I think my head voice is developed to some degree but there is a no mans land between my chest voice and head voice. If I work on a song I tend to get into a lot of pushing/straining/choking lol. No bridging currently happening. On occasion I also like to throw in some BeeGees falsetto.
Anyway, I am excited to get to work and am looking forward to some nice progress.
I am throwing in this link to a "before" song where I sang and played guitar over an existing rhythm track. This was in Jan 2014. Pretty sure all the vox are doubled. (manually sang twice) Im pretty good at doubling...since I have never thought my voice was good enough to stand on its own yet lol. Any feedback on the singing is welcome. Id be interested as to what my natural range is. I understand it isnt going to be that impressive as it is an untrained voice but maybe we can get an idea of what we are working with and what potential for range and style I might have etc
Thanks a lot for any feedback!
https://clyp.it/egudjvlp
Peace, JonJon
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